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MS Project Management, Oil & Gas, Iranian

October 29, 2017

A young Iranian man who completed my undergraduate studies here in Iran, I earned my first Master’s Degree in England, the MSc in Advanced Chemical Process Design at the University of XXXX in 2009. Since that time, I have lived and worked in Tehran as a Senior Process Engineer and I now I have more …

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MA Psychological Counseling, NYC, Chinese

September 14, 2017

As a Chinese woman, an international student, and a Psychology major at XXU, I have been especially intrigued by the fact that I have witnessed several of my Asian friends and acquaintances suffering from depression and/or anxiety. I look forward to continuing to explore how Asian immigrant populati…

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Foreign Trained Dentist, Research Assistant, India

September 14, 2017

My childhood inquisitiveness was legendary within my family. I was curious about everything and conversations with my parents often began with a ‘why’, prompting yet another smiling sigh but I would persist. When my toothless grandmother came home one day with a mouth full of teeth, I was astonished…

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PHD Environmental Sciences, Canada

September 14, 2017

Born and raised in my native Iran, I came to Canada as a young adult and made Toronto my permanent home. Now a citizen of Canada, I hope very much to be accepted to your distinguished PHD Program in Environmental Sciences at the University of XXXX because it is one of the finest programs in the worl…

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OT Masters, African-American, Haitian

September 14, 2017

Now that I have extensive professional experience giving my all as a Certified Occupational Therapist Assistant (COTA), I feel strongly that I am well prepared to excel in graduate school in Occupational Therapy. By advancing my education in this area, I will gain the knowledge, perspective, exposur…

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Orthodontics Residency, Dentist from Iran

September 14, 2017

 

I qualified as a dentist in May 2014 and have worked as a general dentist since October of that year in California. I have long had an interest in orthodontics arising from the experiences of a family member. My brother suffered a severe malocclusion as a child and was teased and laughed a…

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MA Cognitive-Behavioral Therapy (CBT)

September 12, 2017

I feel strongly that I am an especially good fit for your MA Program in Counseling Psychology at XXXX College primarily because of the thoroughgoing nature and the widely recognized quality of your program, as one of the best in the Northeastern USA. This is especially true with respect to Cogni…

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PHD IT, Pathologist Assistant Faculty

September 12, 2017

Now 38 years old, I have been living in the USA for the second half of my life, leaving my native Portugal and coming to America alone at the age of 19 in search of adventure, career, human growth and experience, etc; I decided to stay and make it my home. Speaking very little English when I fir…

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MA Counseling, Alcoholic Father, Suicide Mother

September 8, 2017

I am applying to your distinguished Rehabilitation and Mental Health Counseling Program at the University of XXXX because I wish to devote the balance of my life to helping people to heal from the wounds of trauma and abuse, especially with respect to childhood. Now 45 years old, for the past 4 year…

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MA Political Science, European, African Woman

September 8, 2017

Your highly distinguished MA Program in Political Science at the XXXX European University if my first choice for graduate school because of the very progressive and creative nature of both your Political Science faculty and the university as a whole. An African woman who now lives in Denmark, I want…

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PHD Epidemiology Public Health LOR

May 23, 2017

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is XXXX MD and I am writing this letter on behalf of my studentXXXX, who is applying to your distinguished PHD Program in Epidemiology at the University of XXXX. I could not recommend XXXX more highly and I am most certain that with her vast experience, prowess, en…

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MS Healthcare Management, Homeopathic Doctor

May 22, 2017

I am a homeopathic physician from India who is building a new home here in America. Over the course of the last several years, I have found myself increasingly attracted to the business aspects of health care, issues of access and efficiency, and how to make health care more affordable as well as mo…

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Real Estate Masters, International Development

April 12, 2017

I am writing on behalf of my application to your distinguished Masters in Professional Studies in Real Estate Program at XXXX with a concentration in the area of International Development. A very hard working young man whose parents immigrated to America from Nigeria, I am currently enrolled in an M…

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Low GPA, Special Consideration Letter for Admission to Graduate School

April 12, 2017

Black football players are not famous for getting good grades. In what follows I ask for special consideration in this regard.

I ask for special consideration with respect to my abysmal showing as an undergraduate student, earning an undergraduate GPA of 2.6. These days, going to school is a comp…

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GRE Waiver Personal Letter of Appeal Editing, Writing Service

April 12, 2017

I write the following in support of my request that the GRE examination be waived as a requisite for my entry into your Master’s in Health Administration Program at the University of XXXX. I ask you to please take into account the many years of experience that I now have in medicine, management, and…

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HRM, Bilingual, Bicultural, Dominican Woman

April 12, 2017

Your distinguished Masters of Science in Human Resource Management Program through the School of Professional Development at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate school and I feel that I am the best fit for your program for several reasons, most of all the sheer excellence of your curricu…

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Library Director Employment Application Statement

April 1, 2017

My philosophy is that a great library director should be someone who knows their community well and is very active in their community. Library directors also need to be great managers of people. The library director should be someone who is dedicated to lifelong education and has demonstrated his or…

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Masters Physician Assistant Studies, Indian

April 1, 2017

I don’t remember the exact moment when I fell in love with my profession. It was more of a gradual process beginning in high school and brought to reality when I was accepted by the best Ayurvedic college of India.  I also became especially highly motivated to study medicine and become a clinician s…

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Masters Real Estate, Finance, Bangladeshi

March 31, 2017

‘What am I trying to do and why?’ This is the question that all professionals of any type ought to have inscribed on their bathroom mirror and on the walls of their offices. All professionals face temptations to ‘wander off the track’ for various reasons such as self-indulgence, concentrating on pro…

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MA TESOL, Business Major, Pakistani

December 6, 2016


Now that I am close to finishing up my double major in Business and Accounting, I want very much to pursue a Masters in TESOL. Having learned ESL as a child, I find a great deal of personal satisfaction helping others to reach their fullest potential in English and I have a great passion for TESOL…

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